Wednesday, September 28, 2011

"Marigolds" Lizbeth's Shoes Paragraph

I had my parents talk about money when we live in  this apartments. They said that we need to start to make more money so we can be pay the bill for the apartment. they need to get a better job. My pants started to save but we had to move from the apartments to anther one. so we and ed up living on the streets

1 comment:

  1. Look over your work before posting it. Have an upperclassman, an adult, or even me look proofread your paragraph.
    :)

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