Thursday, September 29, 2011

Academic Language Practice Paragaph 6

Undocumented immigrants should not be given citizenship. They should not be given citizenship because they can have a very bad history and they can bring it with them and then it can cause problems. Whoever is involved in the process of getting a person legalized, should <b>VERIFY</b> that person's background before they enter the U.S. Even if they could <b>SIMPLIFY</b> the process, they still need to be very thorough with everything. Because we have had problems with terrorists in the past, they need to put the person's whole life in a <b>SEQUENCE</b> of events so they can figure out weather or not they should allow them in the U.S. For these reasons I think undocumented immigrants should not be given citizenship.


1 comment:

  1. You bring up the concern for terrorists entering the US without documentation which seems valid. However, most currentnanti-immigration laws in our area focus on immigrants from Mexico.

    It looks like you are ready for the test!

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