At frist the story was confusing, but it went on the pieces started to fit together. the stroy had alot of foreshdowing that led up to the events. Then the story became cleare to me and the story became to have more action. The villian is zar off. he is facinates me, beacues he has alot of determination to kill, but some how he still loss in the end
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